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The heavens do nothing
And gods don't try
Apathy is a stubborn bride

Lovers don't love, children don't cry
They weep with selfishness
Over the question of why

So if one thing is true, then it is this
Only people are the ones
Who look over stars
Another early morning piece. Opted for something shorter. No idea for what the title should be, so I left it blank. 
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AvisWing Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014   Writer
Titles could be the death of me sometimes. 
But I really love this - its nice and short, simple and beautiful. Well done.
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anticodac Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Same here :) 
Why thank you. I'm not completely proud of the way it's written, but the message is there. Glad you like it. 
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AvisWing Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014   Writer
well you can't always be happy with every single piece you write but I still think this was quite good :D
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anticodac Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
True, and once again, thank you :) 
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AvisWing Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014   Writer
Welcome :D
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SylveraDrake Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ooh, I really like the first stanza =o And I always have trouble with titles, haha~
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anticodac Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you :) Yeah, same here. It's hard to come up with a proper one, particularly for this piece too since I felt there was no overall theme. 
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SylveraDrake Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! Poems are always more difficult for me to name than stories for just about that reason XD
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anticodac Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
They are aren't they ? It's always difficult to name a poem, if there's no clearly defined theme, and even then, you might not want to title it after that
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SylveraDrake Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Exactly! XD
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